Wait a minute, this doesn’t make any sense! First, Luke’s car is dark and the doors are closed and Luke is nowhere to be seen. Then, when Jace, Clary, and Simon go out there Luke’s truck’s lights are on and the doors are open? I would also like to point out that this inconstancy is only a few pages apart.
Wow, just wow! I would expect this level inconsistency in a first draft. However, this is the final supposedly edited manuscript. I’m asking what for the millionth time: WAS CASSANDRA CLARE’S EDITORS HIGH?! I know, in this modern age Quality is not a priority anymore in the publishing world, but shit like this really irks me because always give Indie Authors shit because traditional publishing is a supposed to be high quality, And this shit right here is prime example why there is little difference in quality between indie and traditionally published books.
This is a basic level of editing that fanfiction beta editors would have corrected, but her professional publisher just shit like this slide on through? *shakes my head*.